First feedback

The main points we received for the first draft that was the genre was not easily recognisable.  The general guess at the genre was of a documentary, not what we were looking for at all!  Another point was that there was no real 'hook' to the film, or any general idea of what was going to happen in the remainder of the film.

The major worry for us was that the opening was very repetitive.  After watching through again, we realise that this is the case, especially with Rachael and Lorna using the same lines, 'Is the camera on?', 'Is it working?'.  We may get away with using this if we created the full production, but as it is only a 3-minute opening, we won't.